Checkpoint 8 · Reading: understanding texts
Reading Exam Technique: Paper 1 and Paper 2
How to tackle the 25-mark reading section of both papers in about 35 minutes: reading the insert, marks as points, every question type with a model method, tick boxes, quoting and timing, plus two full original practice papers with answers.
British & IGCSE › Checkpoint 8 English (Cambridge Lower Secondary 0861)
The reading section at a glance
Both Checkpoint English papers (and the Stage 8 Progression Test you sit in school, which has the same format) begin with Section A: Reading, worth 25 marks, followed by Section B: Writing, also worth 25 marks. Each paper lasts 1 hour 10 minutes. The reading texts are printed in a separate insert (a booklet); you write your answers in the question paper.
| Paper 1 Non-fiction | Paper 2 Fiction | |
|---|---|---|
| Paper length | 1 hour 10 minutes (50 marks) | 1 hour 10 minutes (50 marks) |
| Reading section | Section A: 25 marks | Section A: 25 marks |
| Suggested reading time | about 35 minutes (30 minutes was suggested on 2023 papers) | about 35 minutes |
| What is in the insert | one or two non-fiction texts (some series have Text A and Text B), e.g. an article, review, travel writing, biography, a web page | one prose fiction extract from a novel or short story |
| Questions | roughly 9-12 numbered questions, many with parts (a), (b), (c), each part usually worth 1-4 marks | the same style: roughly 9-12 numbered questions with parts, 1-4 marks each |
| Writing that follows | one non-fiction task (25 marks) | one story, usually linked to the theme of the extract (25 marks) |
Reading and writing are worth exactly the same: 25 marks each. Students who spend 50 minutes on reading leave themselves 20 minutes for a piece of writing worth the same marks. Keep to roughly 35 minutes for Section A, then move on, even if one question is unfinished. You can come back at the end.
Step 1: Reading the insert the right way
The two papers need two different starting strategies, because non-fiction and fiction are read for different reasons.
| Paper 1 (Non-fiction) | Paper 2 (Fiction) | |
|---|---|---|
| Start with… | the questions, then the text | the whole text, then the questions |
| Why | Non-fiction questions mostly ask you to locate, select and explain information. Reading the questions first means you scan with a purpose. | Fiction questions depend on character, setting, relationships and mood as the story develops. You cannot answer them from one paragraph. |
| Exception | If the text is a recount, a biography or an autobiography (a story about a real person), read it all first: questions about the person need the whole picture. | — |
| While reading | underline the keywords from each question when you find them. Number the paragraphs if they are not numbered | annotate: underline each character when they first appear, the setting (where/when), relationships, and any striking detail, image or change of mood |
| Two texts? | Read the title and first lines of both. Notice which text each question is about: 'Text A' and 'Text B' questions are not interchangeable. | — |
Annotating fiction (Paper 2). As you read, make tiny notes in the margin: 'nervous', 'mood changes', 'simile', 'turning point'. For characters, use the STEAL tool you already know from realistic fiction: what the character Says, Thinks, their Effect on others, their Actions and how they Look. Questions about character are almost always answered from these five things.
Step 2: Read every question like a detective
- Circle the instruction. 'Give ONE word', 'Give two reasons', 'In your own words', 'Tick two', 'Quote', 'Use evidence from paragraph 3'. The instruction is marked as strictly as the content: two words when it asks for one word can score zero.
- Underline the keywords: the paragraph or line number, the character's name, the feeling or idea you must find.
- Look at the marks. The number of marks usually tells you the number of separate points the examiner wants (see Step 3).
- Go to the exact place in the text the question names. Most questions tell you where to look. Answers from elsewhere usually get nothing.
- Check before you move on: does my answer match the instruction, the number of points and the right part of the text?
| Command word | What it wants |
|---|---|
| Give / Find / Identify / State / Name / Write down | a short, direct answer. No explanation |
| Copy / Quote | the exact words from the text, inside inverted commas |
| In your own words | the meaning rewritten with your own vocabulary. Do not copy the text's key words |
| Describe | what something is like |
| Explain | how or why. Give the reason or the effect, not just the feature |
| Suggest | a sensible idea of your own based on the text (more than one answer can be right) |
| What impression…? / What do you learn…? | an inference (adjective or idea) plus evidence |
| Compare | similarities and/or differences, mentioning both texts or both parts |
| Summarise | the main points only, briefly, in your own words, within the word limit |
Step 3: Marks = points
Look at the mark in brackets before you write a single word. As a rule, one mark = one clear point. A 1-mark question needs a short, precise answer; a 3-mark question needs three separate points (or one point with quotation and explanation, if that is what the question asks for).
| Marks | What a full-mark answer usually looks like | Rough length |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | one word, one phrase, one fact, or one ticked box | a few words |
| 2 | two separate points, OR one point + explanation, OR one quotation + its effect | 1-2 sentences |
| 3 | three points, OR an opinion + two pieces of evidence, OR point + quotation + explanation | 3-4 sentences |
| 4 | two points each with a quotation and explanation, OR four pieces of information in a table | 4-6 sentences |
- One brilliant idea for a 3-mark question still gets about 1 mark.
- Writing half a page for a 1-mark question wastes time you need later.
- If a question says 'Give two', write them on separate lines: 1) … 2) …
- Never leave a question blank. A sensible guess with a quotation can still earn a mark.
Step 4: The question catalogue (with a model method for each)
These are the kinds of question that appear in Checkpoint 8 reading, described in our own words. Learn the method for each one: most students lose marks because they use the wrong method, not because they misunderstand the text.
| Question type | What it asks | Model method | Usual marks |
|---|---|---|---|
| Retrieve a detail | Find a fact stated in the text (who, where, how many, what). | Go to the named paragraph · scan for the keyword · copy or rewrite the fact briefly. No explanation. | 1 |
| Find a word / phrase that means… | Find the word in a named paragraph that has the given meaning. | Match the word class. Test by swapping it into the sentence. Copy it exactly. One word means one word. | 1 |
| Effect of a single word | Why did the writer choose this word? | Quote the word → say what it suggests (connotation) → say what the reader feels or pictures. | 1-2 |
| Tick one / Tick two | Choose the correct option(s) about purpose, punctuation, what the reader learns, features. | Read the stem twice · count how many ticks · eliminate wrong options with evidence · tick exactly the number asked. | 1 |
| Sentence type | Identify a sentence as simple, compound, complex or compound-complex. | Count the clauses (verbs with subjects). Find the joining word: and/but/so = compound · because/when/although/who = complex. | 1 |
| Effect of sentence length | Why a short sentence, or a long complex one, here? | Short: tension, shock, emphasis, a sudden change, a pause. Long: detail, a flow of events, rising excitement or panic. Link to this moment in the text. | 1-2 |
| Effect of a grammatical choice | Why open with a subordinate clause, a prepositional phrase or an adverbial? Why a list of nouns? Why 'Instead' or 'But'? | Name the choice → what it puts first or emphasises → how it affects pace, mood or focus. | 1-2 |
| Purpose of punctuation | What is this colon / semicolon / pair of dashes / single dash / ellipsis / hyphen / brackets / inverted commas / capital letters / italics doing? | State the use precisely (see the punctuation table below) and, for 2 marks, add the effect on the reader. | 1-2 |
| Language devices | Find or explain a simile, metaphor, personification, imagery or comparison. | Name the device → quote it → explain what is compared and why → effect on reader. | 1-3 |
| Structure and cohesion | How does this sentence link two paragraphs? Why a one-line paragraph? Why start mid-conversation? Match paragraphs to their main ideas. | Look back and forward: which word refers to the earlier paragraph, and which word introduces the new idea? For a one-line paragraph: emphasis, suspense, a turning point. | 1-2 |
| Text type and features | What type of text is this? Which features make it formal / a review / an article? Compare Text A and Text B. | Name the type. Give features with examples from the text (headline, subheadings, direct address, first person, facts and figures, quotations, rhetorical questions). | 1-2 |
| Writer's viewpoint and voice | What does the writer think? How does the writer engage the reader? Which phrase shows the narrator's/character's voice? | Look for opinion words, first-person comments, rhetorical questions, direct address ('you'), humour and informal phrases. | 1-3 |
| Inference about character | What does this show about how she feels? What is their relationship like? | Name the feeling or trait (an adjective) + the evidence (STEAL: speech, thoughts, effect on others, actions, looks) + a short explanation. | 1-4 |
| Evaluative opinion | Would you…? Is the place pleasant? Give your opinion with evidence. | State a clear opinion (yes/no) → two quotations → explain how each supports your view. Either opinion can score if it is supported. | 2-4 |
| Explain in your own words + quote | Explain an idea in your own words, then support it. | Rewrite the idea with synonyms. Then add a short quotation as evidence. | up to 4 |
| Table of information | Complete a table with details from the text. | One fact per box · keep it short · take it from the paragraphs named. | 2-4 |
| Summary | Summarise something in about 40-50 words (sometimes from notes). | List the relevant points first. Join them in full sentences in your own words. No examples, no quotations, no opinions. Count your words. | 2 |
Sentence types and punctuation are different skills and are tested by different questions, so keep them apart in your head: a sentence-type question asks how many clauses and how they are joined; a punctuation question asks what job a mark is doing.
| Punctuation mark | All the uses you can write |
|---|---|
| Colon (:) | introduces a list · introduces an explanation · adds emphasis to what follows · introduces extra information |
| Semicolon (;) | joins two independent clauses / two closely related sentences into one |
| Pair of dashes (— … —) | adds extra information |
| Single dash (—) | adds emphasis to what follows. Shows an interruption in the middle of speech |
| Ellipsis (…) | shows incomplete information. Creates suspense or a pause. Shows an interruption or speech trailing off |
| Brackets ( ) | add extra information |
| Pair of commas | add extra information (a comma can also show contrast, depending on the context) |
| Inverted commas | show direct speech. Show a quotation from someone. Show a word is not used in its literal meaning. Show something is not the real name (e.g. a nickname) |
| Hyphen (-) | joins words to make one compound word or adjective (well-known, ten-year-old) |
| Exclamation mark | shows strong feeling: surprise, shock, excitement, anger, or a command |
| Question mark / rhetorical question | asks a question. A rhetorical question makes the reader think and involves them |
| Capital letters / italics (for emphasis) | stress a word, show shouting, or mark a title or a foreign word |
Tick one / tick two: the rules
- Read the stem twice. Is it asking for the true statement or the one that is not true?
- Count the boxes you must tick. Tick two means exactly two. Ticking three usually scores zero.
- Cross out options that are clearly wrong. Then go back to the text for each remaining option.
- Beware the 'half-right' option: it is true about the text but does not answer this question.
- A tick-two question usually carries 1 mark for both correct ticks, so one wrong tick loses everything.
- If you change your mind, make the change very clear (cross out the old tick completely).
Quoting rules
- Copy exactly. Same spelling, same words. A mis-copied quotation can lose the mark.
- Keep it short. Choose the 1-8 words that prove your point. Copying a whole paragraph shows the examiner you have not found the evidence.
- Use inverted commas around every quotation.
- Embed it in your sentence where possible: The writer calls the market 'a living river of colour', which suggests…
- Always explain after quoting, unless the question asks only for a word or phrase. A quotation is evidence, not an answer.
- Do not quote when the question says 'in your own words', and do not quote in a summary.
- Quote from the right place: the paragraph or lines named in the question, and the right text (A or B).
Timing plan for 35 minutes
| Minutes | What you do |
|---|---|
| 0-5 | Paper 1: read all the questions, circle instructions, underline keywords, then skim the text(s). Paper 2: read the whole extract, annotating. |
| 5-30 | Answer in order. Use about 1 minute per mark (a 3-mark question ≈ 3 minutes). If stuck, write your best guess, mark it with a star and move on. |
| 30-35 | Check: every question answered? Number of ticks correct? One-word answers really one word? Summary within the word limit? Return to starred questions. |
- القراءة 25 درجة والكتابة 25 درجة؛ لا تقضِ أكثر من 35 دقيقة تقريبًا في القراءة.
- دقيقة واحدة لكل درجة تقريبًا: سؤال بـ 3 درجات = 3 أفكار و3 دقائق.
- في الورقة الأولى (non-fiction) اقرأ الأسئلة أولًا ثم النص؛ إلا لو كان النص سيرة أو recount فاقرأه كله أولًا.
- في الورقة الثانية (fiction) اقرأ القصة كلها أولًا وعلّم على الشخصيات والمكان والمشاعر.
- ضع دائرة على التعليمات (one word / tick two / own words) لأن مخالفتها تضيّع الدرجة حتى لو الإجابة صحيحة.
Practice Paper 1: Non-fiction reading (25 marks, 35 minutes)
Set a timer for 35 minutes. Read the questions first, then the text. The text is a magazine article. The paragraphs are numbered.
The Rooftop Farmers of Cairo
[1] Look up from almost any street in Cairo and you will see them: satellite dishes, water tanks and forgotten furniture crowding the flat roofs of the city. But on a growing number of buildings, something else is appearing. Between the tanks and the washing lines, green leaves are pushing through wooden boxes. Cairo's rooftop farmers have arrived.
[2] Hoda Mansour, a retired science teacher, started her rooftop garden in Heliopolis five years ago with three plastic crates and a packet of seeds. "My neighbours thought I had lost my mind," she laughs. Today her roof produces tomatoes, mint, rocket, peppers and aubergines — enough to feed her family and two neighbours for most of the year. Shallow trays of water feed the plants slowly, so very little is wasted.
[3] Why does it matter? Cairo is one of the most crowded cities in Africa, and green space is scarce. Rooftop gardens cool the buildings beneath them, which means families switch on their air conditioners less often during the scorching summer months. On a July afternoon, a bare concrete roof can become too hot to touch, while a planted roof stays far cooler. The leaves also trap some of the dust that hangs over the city, and the plants attract bees and birds that had almost vanished from some districts.
[4] There are practical benefits, too. Vegetables grown on a roof travel a few metres to the kitchen instead of hundreds of kilometres by lorry. They are fresher, they cost less and they need no plastic packaging. Some families now sell their extra produce to local shops; others swap it with neighbours for bread or eggs.
[5] Not everyone is convinced. Some building owners worry about the weight of soil and water on old roofs, and they are right to be careful: a fully watered garden is surprisingly heavy. Experts recommend light containers, special soil mixtures and — most importantly — a check by an engineer before you begin.
[6] However, the rooftop movement keeps spreading. Schools in Giza and Alexandria have started gardens where pupils measure plant growth in science lessons and cook what they harvest. At one Giza school, the pupils' own mint now flavours the tea served to visiting parents. Community groups run free weekend workshops, and online forums share advice on everything from fighting pests to saving seeds.
[7] Hoda believes the change is only beginning. "Every roof in this city is an empty field waiting for a farmer," she says. "You don't need land. You need a bucket, some seeds and a little patience." Standing among her tomato plants, with the call to prayer drifting over the rooftops and the traffic far below, it is hard to disagree.
Questions (marks in brackets, total 25). Write your answers, then open each one to check it with the mark guidance.
1 (a) Look at paragraph 2. How long ago did Hoda Mansour start her rooftop garden? [1]
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Five years ago. (1 mark. Accept 'five years'.)1 (b) Give TWO things she used to start her garden. [1]
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Three plastic crates and a packet of seeds. (1 mark for both.)2 Give ONE word from paragraph 3 that means 'in short supply' or 'hard to find'. [1]
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scarce. (1 mark. 'crowded' is wrong: different meaning. Two or more words = 0.)3 (a) In paragraph 1, the writer says green leaves are 'pushing through' wooden boxes. Explain the effect of the word 'pushing'. [2]
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Award 1 mark for meaning + 1 for effect. Possible answers: 'pushing' suggests the plants are growing strongly / forcing their way up (1). It makes the plants seem determined and full of life, almost like people (personification) (1). It suggests nature is fighting back against the crowded, grey city (1). It creates a positive, hopeful image of growth (1). Max 2.3 (b) Why does the writer end paragraph 1 with the short sentence 'Cairo's rooftop farmers have arrived.'? [2]
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Any two of: it is short and dramatic, so it stands out after the longer sentences (1). It emphasises the main idea/topic of the article (1). It creates interest and makes the reader want to read on to find out who the farmers are (1). It sounds like an announcement, as if something important has happened (1). It builds a sense of surprise after describing the cluttered roofs (1).4 (a) Look at the colon in paragraph 1 ('you will see them: satellite dishes…'). Tick ONE: the colon is used to… A) join two related independent clauses B) introduce a list C) show contrast D) introduce direct speech [1]
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B: it introduces a list (satellite dishes, water tanks and forgotten furniture).4 (b) In paragraph 5, what is the purpose of the pair of dashes in '— most importantly —'? [1]
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They add extra information (the writer's comment that the engineer's check is the most important step). (1 mark)5 Look at this sentence from paragraph 4: 'Some families now sell their extra produce to local shops; others swap it with neighbours for bread or eggs.' What type of sentence is it? [1]
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Compound sentence: two independent clauses ('Some families now sell…' and 'others swap…') of equal importance, joined into one sentence. (1 mark)6 Paragraph 6 begins with 'However'. Explain how this word links paragraph 6 to paragraph 5. [2]
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1 mark for the link back, 1 for the contrast. Paragraph 5 describes people's worries about rooftop gardens (1). 'However' introduces a contrast, showing that despite these worries the movement is still growing (1).7 Using paragraph 6, complete the table to show three ways the rooftop movement is spreading. [3] | Who | What they do | Schools … | Community groups … | Online forums …
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Schools: pupils measure plant growth in science lessons and cook what they harvest (1). Community groups: run free weekend workshops (1). Online forums: share advice (e.g. on fighting pests and saving seeds) (1). 1 mark per correct row.8 In paragraph 7, Hoda says, 'Every roof in this city is an empty field waiting for a farmer.' What does she mean? [2]
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1 mark for meaning + 1 for development. Possible answers: every roof could be used to grow food (1). The empty roofs are wasted space with great potential (1). Anyone can become a farmer, you do not need land (1). This is a metaphor that makes the idea hopeful and encouraging (1). Max 2.9 (a) Tick TWO features that show this text is a magazine article. A) a title that grabs attention B) numbered instructions C) quotations from a real person D) a list of ingredients E) a 'Dear Sir' greeting [1]
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A and C. (1 mark for both correct, but no mark if more than two are ticked.)9 (b) Why does the writer include Hoda's own words in the article? [2]
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Any two of: to show a real example, which makes the article believable (1). To make it personal and human, so readers relate to her (1). To add her lively voice and humour ('My neighbours thought I had lost my mind') (1). To give an expert/experienced opinion that supports the writer's view (1). To encourage readers that they could do it too ('You need a bucket, some seeds and a little patience') (1).10 Does the writer think rooftop gardens are a good idea? Give your opinion and support it with TWO quotations from the text. [3]
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1 mark for a clear answer + 1 for each supported quotation. Model: Yes, the writer is in favour (1). The writer lists benefits such as 'Rooftop gardens cool the buildings beneath them', showing they help families in the heat (1). The ending, 'it is hard to disagree', shows the writer agrees with Hoda that the movement is positive (1). Also accept 'They are fresher, they cost less', 'the rooftop movement keeps spreading'. Note: an answer saying the writer is balanced can earn credit if it uses paragraph 5 as evidence, but the overall viewpoint is positive.11 In 40-50 words, summarise the benefits of rooftop gardens described in paragraphs 3 and 4. Use your own words. [2]
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Model (45 words): Rooftop gardens make buildings cooler, so families need less air conditioning. They reduce dust and bring back bees and birds. Food grown on roofs is fresher and cheaper, and needs no transport or plastic wrapping. Families can also sell or exchange extra vegetables with neighbours. — 2 marks: most of the points, in own words, within 40-50 words. 1 mark: some points, or copied wording, or over/under the word limit. 0: quotations only or no relevant points.
Total 25. 21-25: excellent technique. 15-20: secure. Look at which question types lost marks. Below 15: go back to Step 2 and Step 3 and redo the paper tomorrow without looking at the answers.
Practice Paper 2: Fiction reading (25 marks, 35 minutes)
Set a timer for 35 minutes. This time, read the whole extract first and annotate it (characters, setting, feelings, striking language). Then answer the questions. The paragraphs are numbered.
The Night Ferry
[1] The ferry's horn gave one long groan, and the lights of the harbour began to slide away. Layla gripped the rail with both hands. Behind her, the deck was crowded with sacks of rice, crates of complaining chickens and passengers wrapped in blankets, but she had never felt so alone.
[2] "Your aunt will meet you at the jetty," her mother had said that morning, pressing a folded note into her palm. "Show this to the captain if there is any problem. It's just one night. You are twelve now." Layla had nodded and smiled as if it were nothing. Now the note was damp with sweat, and the smile had gone.
[3] The river was wide and black. Every few minutes a fishing boat drifted past, its single lantern swinging like a tired eye. On the far bank, the palm trees stood in a dark line, silent guards watching the water.
[4] "First time alone?"
[5] Layla jumped. An old man was sitting on an upturned crate beside her, peeling an orange with a small knife. His galabeya was patched at the elbows, and his face was as creased as a map that had been folded too many times.
[6] "No," she said quickly. Then, because he only raised an eyebrow, "Yes."
[7] He chuckled and offered her a piece of orange. She hesitated, remembering every warning she had ever been given, then took it. It was sweet and cold, and for a moment the knot in her stomach loosened.
[8] "I worked on this ferry for forty years," he said. "Carried letters, medicine, once even a goat that ate my hat." He pointed the knife at the dark bank. "You see that light? The one that flickers? That is Kafr el-Nour. Your aunt's village, I think."
[9] Layla stared. "How did you know?"
[10] "Everyone on this boat is going somewhere." He shrugged. "You keep looking at that bank as if it might disappear."
[11] She laughed — a small, surprised sound — and realised it was the first time she had laughed all day. She asked him about the goat, and he told her, and the story grew longer and sillier with every sentence until she was holding her sides.
[12] Then the engine coughed. Once. Twice. And stopped.
[13] Silence fell over the deck like a heavy blanket. Somewhere a baby began to cry. The ferry turned slowly in the current, drifting sideways, and the flickering light of Kafr el-Nour slid out of sight behind the boat.
[14] Layla's fingers found the note in her pocket. Her heart was hammering. She looked at the old man, expecting to see fear, but he was calmly wiping his knife on his sleeve.
[15] "Ah," he said. "She does this. She is old, like me." He stood up, stiff-kneed, and handed Layla the rest of the orange. "Hold this. I will be back in a minute..."
[16] He walked towards the engine room, and the crew stepped aside to let him pass, as if he were the captain himself.
Questions (marks in brackets, total 25).
1 (a) Where is Layla travelling to? [1]
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To her aunt's village (Kafr el-Nour). (1 mark)1 (b) Who has told Layla that someone will meet her? [1]
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Her mother. (1 mark)2 Give ONE word from paragraph 1 which shows that the chickens were noisy. [1]
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complaining. (1 mark)3 Give TWO pieces of evidence from paragraphs 1-2 that show Layla is nervous. [2]
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Any two (1 mark each): she 'gripped the rail with both hands' / 'she had never felt so alone' / 'the note was damp with sweat' / 'the smile had gone'. (She only pretended to be calm: 'smiled as if it were nothing'.)4 (a) In paragraph 3, the writer describes a lantern 'swinging like a tired eye'. Explain the effect of this simile. [2]
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1 mark for the meaning, 1 for the effect. Possible answers: the lantern's dim, swinging light is compared to a sleepy eye (1). It makes the river seem dark, lonely and slow (1). It creates a quiet, uneasy, slightly eerie mood (1). It suggests someone/something is watching Layla, adding to her nervousness (1). It reflects how late and tired the night feels (1). Max 2.4 (b) The palm trees are described as 'silent guards watching the water'. What feeling does this create? [1]
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Any one: a feeling of being watched / tension / unease / a mysterious, threatening atmosphere / loneliness, as if no one friendly is there. (1 mark)5 Paragraph 4 is a single line: 'First time alone?' Why does the writer put this in a paragraph on its own? [2]
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Any two: it makes the line stand out and surprise the reader, just as it surprises Layla (1). It creates a sudden change/interruption in the quiet description (1). It builds suspense, because we do not yet know who is speaking (1). It introduces a new character and a new part of the story (1). The question shows someone has noticed exactly how Layla feels (1).6 What impression do you get of the old man in paragraphs 5-10? Give TWO impressions, each supported with evidence. [4]
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2 marks per impression: 1 for the impression (an adjective/idea), 1 for supporting evidence. Possible: kind/generous: 'offered her a piece of orange' (1+1). Observant/wise: he guessed her destination because 'You keep looking at that bank' (1+1). Experienced: 'I worked on this ferry for forty years' (1+1). Humorous/friendly: 'once even a goat that ate my hat' (1+1). Poor/humble: 'His galabeya was patched at the elbows' (1+1). Old and weathered: 'as creased as a map' (1+1). (Think STEAL: what he says, his actions, his effect on Layla, his looks.)7 Look at paragraph 11: 'She laughed — a small, surprised sound — and…'. What is the purpose of the pair of dashes? [1]
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They add extra information (describing what her laugh was like). (1 mark)8 Look at paragraph 12: 'Then the engine coughed. Once. Twice. And stopped.' Explain the effect of the very short sentences. [2]
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Any two (1 each): the full stops force the reader to pause after each word, copying the engine failing (1). They build tension/suspense (1). They create a sudden, shocking change after the happy, relaxed paragraph 11 (1). They emphasise each sound, so the reader hears the engine dying (1). 'And stopped' gives a dramatic final moment (1). Also credit: 'coughed' personifies the engine as old and ill.9 'Silence fell over the deck like a heavy blanket.' (paragraph 13). How does this sentence change the mood? [2]
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1 for the new mood, 1 for explaining the image. The mood becomes tense, anxious and frightening (1). The simile suggests the silence is heavy, sudden and covers everyone, as if smothering them, so the passengers feel trapped and afraid (1). Also credit: contrast with the earlier laughter (1).10 Explain how Layla's feelings change from the beginning of the extract to paragraph 11, and then in paragraph 14. [3]
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1 mark for each stage, with evidence or clear reference. At the start she is nervous and lonely ('never felt so alone') (1). By paragraph 11 she has relaxed and is happy, laughing at the old man's story ('holding her sides') (1). In paragraph 14 she is frightened again when the engine stops ('Her heart was hammering') (1).11 (a) Paragraph 15 ends with an ellipsis: 'I will be back in a minute...'. Tick ONE reason the writer uses it. A) to join two independent clauses B) to create suspense about what will happen next C) to introduce a list D) to show a quotation [1]
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B. (The ellipsis can also show the speech trailing off as he walks away, but of these options only B is correct.)11 (b) What does the final sentence suggest about the old man? [2]
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1 mark for the inference, 1 for the evidence/explanation. Possible: he may actually be the captain or a very important, respected person (1), because the crew 'stepped aside to let him pass' (1). He knows the ferry well and is calm in a crisis (1). The reader now trusts that he will fix the problem, so the ending feels hopeful (1). Max 2.
Total 25. Check especially Questions 6 and 10: these longer answers decide the top grades. Did every impression have its own evidence? Did you describe each stage of the change, not just the start and end?
- كتابة أكثر من كلمة عندما يطلب السؤال ONE word.
- وضع علامتين أو ثلاث في سؤال Tick ONE، أو علامة واحدة في Tick TWO.
- الاقتباس بدون شرح في أسئلة explain و impression.
- النسخ من النص في أسئلة in your own words وفي الـ summary.
- الإجابة من فقرة غير المذكورة في السؤال.
- ذكر نقطة واحدة في سؤال عليه 3 درجات.
Final checklist for the reading section
- I know which paper I am on and start the right way (questions first for non-fiction, but the whole text first for fiction and for recounts/biographies).
- I circle every instruction and underline every keyword.
- I match my points to the marks.
- I answer from the paragraph or text named.
- I quote briefly, exactly and inside inverted commas, and I explain every quotation.
- I tick exactly the number of boxes asked.
- I keep my summary within the word limit and in my own words.
- I leave Section A after about 35 minutes and save the full time for my writing.
All pages in this course
Start here: the exam
Reading: grammar & punctuation
- Parts of Speech
- Phrases and Clauses
- Sentence Types, Kinds and Their Effects
- Connectives, Conjunctions and Linking Paragraphs
- Punctuation: Rules and 'Why Has the Writer Used...?'
- Grammar in Use: Tenses, Voice, Speech and Accuracy
Reading: understanding texts
- Text Types and Their Features
- Purpose, Fact and Opinion, and Viewpoint
- Inference, Main Ideas, Themes and Summary
- Language, Devices and Their Effects
- Vocabulary Skills: Context Clues, Word Parts, Idioms and Spelling
- Poetry and Drama: Elements, Types and How They're Asked
- Reading Exam Technique: Paper 1 and Paper 2
Paper 1 writing: non-fiction
- Paper 1 Writing Basics: Purpose, Format, Register and G.A.A.P.
- Autobiography
- Biography
- Recount
- Diary Entry
- Informal and Formal Letters
- Formal and Informal Emails
- Blog Post
- Magazine Article
- Newspaper Report — Writing Pack
- Non-Chronological Reports and Informational Texts — Writing Pack
- Opinion Writing — Writing Pack
- Persuasive Writing — Writing Pack
- Argumentative Writing: One-sided and Balanced (Discursive)
- Problem and Solution Writing
- Leaflet Writing
- Travel Writing (Travel Articles)
- Review Writing
- Instruction Writing
- Advice Writing
Paper 2 writing: fiction
- Fiction Writing Basics: Everything for Paper 2 Writing
- Describing a Setting
- Describing a Character
- Creating Suspense
- Science Fiction and Dystopian Stories
- Fantasy Stories
- Adventure Stories
- Horror Stories (Spooky, Not Gory)
- Mystery Stories
- Crime Mystery (Detective) Stories
- Realistic Fiction: STEAL and Imagery
- Fables and Fairy Tales
- Myths and Legends