Oxford ESL 9280 · Writing
The Article (Question 3 and Question 4)
How to write a full-mark article for the OxfordAQA 9280 Writing paper: purposes, headlines, openings, rhetorical questions, structure, the 15-mark Language bands and two model answers.
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1. What the task is and where it sits in the paper
The Writing paper (9280/W) lasts 1 hour 15 minutes and is worth 60 marks (30% of the whole qualification). It has four compulsory questions that grow in length and marks. You use no dictionary. An article is a piece of writing for a school magazine, a school website or a newspaper. It has a clear purpose, it speaks to many readers at once, and it usually has a headline.
The article can appear in two places on the paper:
| Article as Question 3 | Article as Question 4 | |
|---|---|---|
| Words | 70-90 | 100-150 |
| Marks | 16 = Content and Communication 8 + Language 8 | 23 = Content and Communication 8 + Language 15 |
| Bullet points | Usually 4, and they are compulsory: answer every one | 2, and they are prompts only: use them, add to them or replace them with better ideas |
| Reader | The readers named in the task (e.g. students on the school website) | Treat the reader as an adult (a teacher or the examiner), even if the task says 'school magazine' |
| How common? | Can appear (the specification lists article as a possible Question 3 form) | The most common Question 4 in recent papers, very often 'for your school magazine' |
| Suggested time | About 20 minutes | About 26 minutes |
Because Question 4 is the biggest question on the paper (23 of the 60 marks), most of this page focuses on the Question 4 article. Section 11 shows exactly how to shrink the same skills into a short Question 3 article.
- Article: a text for a magazine, newspaper or website, written for many readers.
- Purpose: what the text must do, e.g. inform, explain, argue or persuade. The purpose is always in the task.
- Bullet points: the ideas under the task. In Question 3 you must cover all of them. In Question 4 they only help you.
- Content and Communication: marks for your ideas, detail, relevance and how clearly you communicate them.
- Language: marks for vocabulary, grammar, sentence variety, spelling and punctuation.
2. The purposes of an article
The verb in the task tells you the purpose. Underline it first. The same topic (for example, healthy eating) becomes a different article depending on the verb.
| Purpose (task verb) | What you must do | Typical language | Example task wording (original) |
|---|---|---|---|
| Inform | Give clear, useful facts and details. Stay neutral. | There are…, It is located…, Visitors can…, Did you know that…? | Write an article to inform visitors about a festival in your country. |
| Explain | Give reasons (why) or methods (how) and develop each one with an example and a result. | This is because…, As a result…, This means that…, One way to… is… | Write an article to explain why sleep matters for teenagers. |
| Argue | Take one clear side and support it with reasons and evidence. Answer the other side briefly. | I strongly believe…, Some people claim… However…, It is clear that… | Write an article to argue that every school should have a garden. |
| Persuade | Make the reader do or believe something. Use emotion, direct address and a call to action. | Imagine…, Why not…?, You will…, Don't miss…, Join us… | Write an article to persuade students to learn a musical instrument. |
| Describe why / how | Describe a process, a change or the reasons behind something, with vivid detail. | First of all…, Gradually…, What makes it special is… | Write an article describing how your town has changed. |
Argue = convince the reader's mind with reasons (logic). Persuade = move the reader to act (logic + feelings + 'you'). An argue article can end with a firm conclusion. A persuade article should end with a clear call to action.
3. How the marks work (bands in plain English)
Examiners use two separate grids: one for Content and Communication and one for Language. They read the whole piece, find the band that fits best (working upwards from the lowest), then choose a mark inside that band. Every word you write is read and credited. The grids below are explained in our own words.
Content and Communication (8 marks), the same grid for Question 3 and Question 4:
| Band | Marks | What it looks like |
|---|---|---|
| 4 | 7-8 | Excellent. Every sentence is relevant. Lots of developed detail (reasons, examples, results). Easy to follow from start to finish. |
| 3 | 5-6 | Good. Almost always relevant, with a range of detail. Generally clear, but one or two moments are unclear. |
| 2 | 3-4 | Satisfactory. Mostly relevant, with some detail. Sometimes the reader cannot follow the message. |
| 1 | 1-2 | Limited. Some relevant information, but the meaning often breaks down. |
| 0 | 0 | Nothing worth credit. |
Language for a Question 4 article (15 marks, five bands):
| Band | Marks | Vocabulary and sentences | Accuracy |
|---|---|---|---|
| 5 | 13-15 | Well-chosen, precise vocabulary and structures used on purpose, for effect. Complex sentences handled confidently. Fluent and effective. | Very high. Only the odd small slip. |
| 4 | 10-12 | Varied vocabulary. Some structures chosen for effect. Complex sentences are usually correct. Mostly effective. | Good spelling and punctuation. |
| 3 | 7-9 | Some variety. Complex sentences are attempted and sometimes work. Coherent and relevant. | Generally accurate. |
| 2 | 4-6 | A clear attempt at variety. Simple sentences are secure and basic linking words are used correctly. Some clear meaning. | More correct than incorrect. |
| 1 | 1-3 | Little range. Short or insecure sentences. Meaning only sometimes clear. | Frequent errors. |
Language for a Question 3 article (8 marks, four bands): 7-8 = accurate spelling and punctuation with a wide variety of effective vocabulary and structures. 5-6 = generally accurate with a variety of suitable vocabulary and structures. 3-4 = more accurate than inaccurate with some variety. 1-2 = frequent errors and limited or repetitive language.
- It does not mean rare, difficult or 'dictionary' words.
- It means the best choice of word for this reader and this purpose, used accurately. 'Crucial' instead of 'very important' is sophisticated. 'quintessential' used wrongly is not.
- Clarity always comes first. A clear, accurate sentence beats a long, confusing one.
- Sophisticated structures include: a rhetorical question placed for effect, a sentence that starts with 'Although…', a relative clause ('…, which…'), a conditional ('If schools…, students would…'), a short punchy sentence after a long one.
- Question 4 does not need any special new feature. It needs the same accuracy and variety as Questions 2 and 3, kept up for longer.
| Not sophisticated (showing off or vague) | Sophisticated (precise and natural) |
|---|---|
| The environment is very very important for the whole humanity. | Our neighbourhood is shared by everyone, so everyone should protect it. |
| Sport is good and nice and makes you happy. | Regular exercise lifts your mood and sharpens your concentration. |
| This is a quintessential paradigm of altruism. | This is a perfect example of helping others without expecting anything back. |
| There are a lot of bad things about it. | It has several serious drawbacks. |
4. How to get full marks: checklist
- Underline the purpose verb (inform / explain / argue / persuade) and the topic. Every paragraph must serve both.
- Write a short headline (3-8 words). It earns no marks on its own, but it shows the reader your angle at once.
- Open with an engaging first line: a rhetorical question, a short scene, a bold statement.
- Use the two bullets as a starting point, then add at least one idea of your own. Extra relevant ideas are rewarded in Question 4.
- Write 4-5 paragraphs, one main idea each, starting with a clear topic sentence.
- Develop every point: point → reason → example → result for the reader.
- For argue/persuade, mention the other side once and answer it ('Some say… However…').
- Show variety: at least three types of complex sentence, one or two rhetorical questions, and precise vocabulary.
- Use linking words between and inside paragraphs (Firstly, Moreover, However, As a result, Ultimately).
- End with a conclusion that clinches the argument and, for persuade, a call to action.
- Stay inside 100-150 words. There is no penalty for going over, but long answers lose focus and accuracy, and short ones are thin.
- Save 3 minutes to check spelling, capital letters, full stops, verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.
- اقرأ الفعل في السؤال جيداً: inform يعني معلومات، وexplain يعني أسباباً وطرقاً، وargue يعني رأياً واحداً واضحاً مع الأسباب، وpersuade يعني أن تقنع القارئ بأن يفعل شيئاً.
- في السؤال الرابع النقطتان (bullets) للمساعدة فقط، ويمكنك أن تضيف أفكاراً من عندك، وهذا يرفع درجتك.
- اكتب عنواناً قصيراً وبداية فيها سؤال أو جملة قوية، ثم 4-5 فقرات قصيرة، في كل فقرة فكرة واحدة مع سبب ومثال.
- الكلمات «الراقية» لا تعني الكلمات الصعبة، بل الكلمة المناسبة المكتوبة بشكل صحيح. الوضوح أهم شيء.
- اترك آخر 3 دقائق للمراجعة: الإملاء، والنقاط، والحروف الكبيرة، وتصريف الأفعال.
5. Structure: paragraph by paragraph (Question 4)
| Part | Words (approx.) | What to write | Tip |
|---|---|---|---|
| Headline | 3-8 | Shows topic and angle: 'Give an Hour, Gain a Lot' | No full stop. Capital letters on key words, or sentence case. |
| Opening paragraph | 25-35 | Hook + the topic + your clear position or aim | For argue/persuade, state your view in the last sentence of the opening. |
| Body paragraph 1 | 30-35 | Your strongest reason or explanation, developed with an example | Often linked to bullet 1. |
| Body paragraph 2 | 25-35 | A second reason, a method ('how'), or your own extra idea | Often linked to bullet 2. |
| Counter-argument (argue/persuade) | 15-25 | 'Some people believe… However…' | Short. Answer it. Do not agree with it. |
| Conclusion | 20-30 | Sum up in fresh words + call to action or memorable final thought | Never add a brand-new argument here. |
Balanced or one-sided? Choose according to the task verb.
| One-sided article | Balanced article |
|---|---|
| Used for argue and persuade tasks. | Used when the task says discuss, consider both sides or asks about advantages and disadvantages, or for some explain and inform tasks. |
| Every paragraph supports your view. | Give both sides fairly, in separate paragraphs. |
| Mention the opposite view once, then knock it down. | Weigh them up in the conclusion and give your final judgement. |
| Ends with a strong call to action. | Ends with a reasoned opinion ('On balance, I believe…'). |
6. Headlines and how to start
A headline costs very few words and helps the reader at once. Keep it short and connected to your purpose.
| Headline technique | Example (original) |
|---|---|
| Question | Is Your Phone Stealing Your Sleep? |
| Command | Switch Off and Step Outside |
| Alliteration (same first sound) | Fit, Fresh and Focused |
| Contrast | Small Effort, Big Reward |
| Play on words | Food for Thought: Learn to Cook |
Six ways to open the article (choose one, never all):
- Rhetorical question: 'When did you last spend an entire afternoon without looking at a screen?'
- Imagine…: 'Imagine finishing school with a skill that could feed your family for life.'
- Short scene: 'It is seven in the morning. Omar has slept for four hours and his first exam starts at eight.'
- Bold statement: 'Learning a musical instrument is the best investment a teenager can make.'
- Common belief, then a twist: 'Many people think volunteering is only for adults. They could not be more wrong.'
- Direct address: 'If you have ever felt bored at the weekend, this article is for you.'
Do not invent exact numbers ('97.3% of teenagers…'). They sound false and add nothing. Avoid learning a whole opening paragraph by heart and pasting it into any task: examiners recognise memorised phrases quickly, and they rarely fit the question. Your first sentence must be about this topic.
7. Rhetorical questions and paragraphing
A rhetorical question is a question you do not expect the reader to answer. It makes the reader think and draws them in. Use one or two in a Question 4 article, not more.
| Where | Example | Effect |
|---|---|---|
| In the opening | How many hours did you spend online yesterday? | Hooks the reader and makes the topic personal. |
| Before your strongest point | So what can a single student really change? | Creates curiosity. The next sentence gives the answer. |
| In the conclusion | So why not start this weekend? | Pushes the reader to act. |
Paragraphing shows the examiner your ideas are organised, which helps the 'clear and coherent' part of Content and Communication. Rules:
- One main idea per paragraph, introduced by a topic sentence (e.g. 'Volunteering also builds valuable skills.').
- Leave a clear gap or indent between paragraphs.
- Join paragraphs with a link word or a phrase that looks back: 'Another benefit…', 'Despite this…', 'Getting involved is simple.'
- Do not write one paragraph per sentence. A paragraph needs at least two or three sentences.
8. How to end (conclusion and call to action)
The best articles end with a conclusion that clinches the argument: it reminds the reader of your main idea in fresh words and leaves a strong final thought.
- Call to action: 'Choose one cause this month and give an hour. You will gain far more than you give.'
- Rhetorical question + answer: 'Is it worth the effort? Absolutely.'
- Look to the future: 'If we act now, the next generation will thank us.'
- Return to the opening: 'So, next time you reach for your phone, reach for a book instead.'
- Balanced judgement: 'On balance, the benefits clearly outweigh the drawbacks.'
- Short, punchy final line: 'The choice is yours.'
9. Useful phrases
Stating your view
- I firmly believe that…
- In my view, there is no doubt that…
- It is clear that…
- There are strong reasons why…
Adding points
- Firstly, …
- Moreover, …
- In addition to this, …
- Not only does it…, but it also…
- Another key benefit is that…
Explaining and giving examples
- This is because…
- As a result, …
- This means that…
- For instance, …
- A good example of this is…
Answering the other side
- Some people argue that… However, …
- Critics claim that… Yet…
- Although it is true that…, …
- It may seem that… In fact, …
Persuading the reader
- Imagine…
- Why not…?
- You will soon discover that…
- Surely we all want…?
- There has never been a better time to…
Concluding and calling to action
- Ultimately, …
- All things considered, …
- So, what are you waiting for?
- Take the first step today.
- The choice is yours.
Upgrade words that are precise but natural (spell them correctly and use them only where they fit):
| Word / phrase | Meaning / use |
|---|---|
| crucial / essential | instead of 'very important' |
| beneficial | useful, good for you: 'Exercise is beneficial for your mind.' |
| a drawback | a disadvantage |
| to boost | to increase or improve: 'boost your confidence' |
| to make a difference | to have a good effect on people or a place |
| rewarding | giving satisfaction: 'a rewarding experience' |
| to outweigh | to be greater than: 'The benefits outweigh the costs.' |
| to take part in | to join an activity |
| community | the people who live in an area |
| significant | large or important enough to notice |
| to encourage | to give someone the confidence to do something |
| in the long run | after a long time, in the future |
10. Common mistakes and what to watch for
| Mistake | Why it costs marks | Fix |
|---|---|---|
| Writing about the general topic but ignoring the purpose verb | Content becomes only partly relevant. | Check every paragraph: does it inform / explain / argue / persuade? |
| Only repeating the two bullets in one line each | Content is thin. No 'wide range of detail'. | Develop each point and add your own idea. |
| Very long, unpunctuated sentences joined by 'and' | Language accuracy and clarity drop. | Use full stops. Mix short and complex sentences. |
| Hard words used wrongly | Shows insecure language and can make meaning unclear. | Use a word only if you are sure of its meaning and spelling. |
| Writing to a friend ('Hey guys! LOL') | The register does not suit an adult reader. | Keep a lively but respectful tone. |
| No conclusion, or a conclusion with a new argument | The piece feels unfinished. Coherence suffers. | Sum up and end with a strong final line. |
| Writing far under 100 words | The answer is usually too thin to reach high bands. | Aim for 130-150 words. |
| Writing 250+ words | No penalty, but more errors appear, focus is lost and time is stolen from checking. | Plan. Stop at about 150. |
Suggested timing for the whole paper (75 minutes):
| Question | Marks | Suggested time |
|---|---|---|
| Q1 Picture description | 9 | 10 minutes |
| Q2 Letter | 12 | 14 minutes |
| Q3 Extended piece (e.g. blog, report, article) | 16 | 20 minutes: plan 4, write 13, check 3 |
| Q4 Extended open-purpose piece (often an article) | 23 | 26 minutes: plan 3-5, write 18-20, check 3 |
| Final check of the whole paper | 5 minutes |
11. The Question 3 article (70-90 words)
When the article is Question 3, the rules change in two important ways: the bullet points are compulsory, and you have fewer words. The examiner mentally ticks off each bullet. If one is missing, you cannot reach the top Content band, however good your English is.
| Part | Words (approx.) | What to write |
|---|---|---|
| Headline | 3-6 | Short and lively |
| Opening | 20-25 | Hook + first bullet(s), which are usually quick facts |
| Middle | 25-35 | The 'what' bullet with one or two details |
| Final paragraph | 20-30 | The 'why' bullet, usually the last one, with a real reason, plus one closing line |
The early bullets (name, place, time) can be answered quickly. Spend your best detail on the last 'why' bullet: that is where examiners look for a convincing reason. 'You should join because it is fun' is weak. 'You should join because older students guide beginners patiently, so nobody feels left behind' is strong.
12. Model answers
Give an Hour, Gain a Lot
How many hours did you spend scrolling on your phone last week? Now imagine giving just one of those hours to someone who really needs it. Volunteering is not only for adults. Every student at our school can do it, and should.
Firstly, volunteering helps people in ways that truly matter. When you sort food parcels at a charity or read stories to younger children, you make someone's day easier. Moreover, you develop skills that no classroom can teach, such as teamwork and patience, which universities value highly.
Some students argue that they are too busy. However, most charities need only an hour a week.
Getting involved is simple. Ask the student council for a list of local charities or join a weekend clean-up. So why wait? Choose one cause this month. You will gain far more than you give.
- Purpose (persuade): direct address ('you'), a rhetorical opening, a call to action ('Choose one cause this month') and a memorable final line that echoes the headline.
- Bullets used and extended: paragraph 2 covers why it is valuable. Paragraph 4 covers how to get involved. The counter-argument in paragraph 3 is an extra idea of the writer's own.
- Wide range of detail: each point is developed with a concrete example (food parcels, reading to children, weekend clean-up) and a result ('make someone's day easier').
- Clear and coherent: a headline and four short, purposeful paragraphs with topic sentences ('Firstly…', 'Getting involved is simple.').
- Sophisticated language for effect: rhetorical question, 'Now imagine…', a relative clause ('which universities value highly'), a concession ('Some students argue… However…'), and a short punchy sentence ('So why wait?').
- Vocabulary chosen precisely, not showily: 'truly matter', 'develop skills', 'get involved', 'cause'. All accurate.
- Accuracy: correct apostrophes (someone's), accurate commas, consistent present tense.
'Give an Hour, Gain a Lot' at the top and 'You will gain far more than you give' at the bottom make a frame. The examiner feels the article 'clinches' its argument. This is a simple trick any student can copy.
Robots, Rivals and Real Fun
Our school has a brand-new club, and it is already the talk of Year 10. The Robotics Club meets every Tuesday after school in the computer lab.
Members work in small teams to design, build and program simple robots, which then compete in friendly races at the end of each month.
If you enjoy solving problems, this club is for you. You do not need any experience, because older students guide beginners patiently. Come along next Tuesday and see for yourself!
- All four compulsory bullets covered: name (Robotics Club), when and where (Tuesday, after school, computer lab), what members do (design, build, program, race), why join (problem solving, no experience needed, support from older students).
- Detail where it counts: the final 'why' bullet has two real reasons, not just 'it is fun'.
- Article features at small scale: alliterative headline, an engaging opening ('the talk of Year 10'), a closing call to action.
- Wide variety of structures in few words: a compound sentence, a relative clause ('which then compete…'), a conditional ('If you enjoy…'), a 'because' clause and an imperative.
- Accuracy: spelling, commas in the list and the exclamation mark at the end are all correct.
13. Practice
- في السؤال الثالث يجب أن تجيب عن كل النقاط (bullets). إذا نسيت نقطة واحدة فلن تحصل على الدرجة النهائية في المحتوى.
- في السؤال الرابع النقاط اختيارية، ويمكنك أن تضيف فكرة من عندك أو تذكر رأي الطرف الآخر وترد عليه.
- لا تكتب أرقاماً وإحصائيات مخترعة، ولا تحفظ مقدمة جاهزة تضعها في أي موضوع.
Task A (Question 4, persuade, 100-150 words): Write an article for your school magazine to persuade students to read more books for pleasure. You could write about: why reading is enjoyable, how reading can help young people. Write a short plan.
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Headline: 'Turn the Page, Change Your Day'. Opening: rhetorical question ('When did you last lose yourself in a story?') + view: every student should read for fun. P1 (enjoyable): escape, adventure, characters who feel like friends. Example of finishing a thriller in one night. P2 (helps): richer vocabulary, better writing, longer concentration than short videos. Own idea: reading together as a family or book club. Counter: 'no time' → 15 minutes before bed. Conclusion + call to action: borrow one book from the library this week.Task B (Question 4, argue, 100-150 words): Write an article to argue that every school should have a garden. You could write about: why gardens are good for students, how students could look after a garden. Write a short plan.
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Headline: 'Growing Minds'. Opening: picture a grey playground vs a green one. View: a garden is essential. P1: health and calm, fresh air, a break from screens, fresh vegetables for the canteen. P2: learning outside the classroom (science, responsibility, teamwork). P3 (how): a weekly rota, a gardening club, help from parents at weekends. Counter: 'costs too much' → seeds and tools are cheap. Students provide the work. Conclusion: firm restatement + 'Let our school be the first in the area.'Task C (Question 3, 70-90 words): Write an article for your school website about a sports day at your school. You must write about: when it took place, what events there were, who won, why students enjoyed it. Write a short plan.
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Headline: 'Speed, Sweat and Smiles'. Opening: last Thursday, on the school field (bullet 1). Middle: relay races, long jump and a tug of war between teachers and students (bullet 2). Winner: the Blue House team, who won the final relay by one second (bullet 3). Why enjoyed (most detail): the whole school cheering together, teachers joining in, a break from lessons before exams. Closing line: 'Roll on next year!'Improve this headline and opening: 'Article about phones. Phones are very bad and very good. I will talk about phones in this article.'
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Possible answer: 'Smart Phones, Smarter Choices'. 'Can a device that fits in your pocket really control your whole day? For many teenagers, the honest answer is yes. Phones are powerful tools, but only if we learn to use them wisely.' (The new version has a headline with a clear angle, a rhetorical question hook and a clear position. It removes 'I will talk about…', which wastes words.)Which purpose is each task? (a) Write an article explaining how students can stay healthy during exams. (b) Write an article to convince readers that public transport is better than cars. (c) Write an article telling visitors about a famous market in your city.
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(a) Explain: give methods (how) with reasons and results. (b) Persuade/argue: one-sided, counter-argument, call to action. (c) Inform: clear, neutral facts and details for visitors.Rewrite with more sophisticated language (keep it accurate): 'Exercise is good. It makes you strong. It makes you happy. Many people don't do it.'
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Possible answer: 'Regular exercise strengthens both body and mind; even a short daily walk can lift your mood. Sadly, many people still find excuses to avoid it.' (Precise verbs 'strengthens' and 'lift', a semicolon joining two related sentences, and varied sentence length.)
- Purpose verb answered in every paragraph?
- Headline + engaging opening?
- At least 3 developed points (plus own idea in Q4)?
- Counter-argument answered (argue/persuade)?
- Varied complex sentences and one or two rhetorical questions?
- Conclusion with call to action or strong final thought?
- Inside the word range? Spelling and full stops checked?
All pages in this course
Start here: the exam
Reading (9280/R)
- The Reading Paper (9280/R)
- Reading: Every Question Type
- Reading: Vocabulary in Context
- Reading: Full Practice Paper
Writing (9280/W)
- The Writing Paper: Complete Guide
- Question 1: Picture Description
- Question 2: Letters and Emails (How to Get 12/12)
- Question 3: Blog and Diary Entry
- The Article (Question 3 and Question 4)
- The Report (Question 3)
- Extended Writing (Question 4)
Listening (9280/L)
Speaking (9280/S)