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IGCSE 0510 · Paper 1 Writing

Writing a Review (Exercise 6)

How to write a full-mark Exercise 6 review of a film, book, place, event or product: structure, what to cover for each type, evaluative language, recommendations and two annotated model reviews.

British & IGCSE › Cambridge IGCSE English as a Second Language (0510)

A review tells readers what something is like – a film, a book, a café, a concert, an app – and whether they should spend their time and money on it. It is the only Exercise 6 text type where your personal opinion is the whole point. But an opinion alone is not enough: the examiner wants description + evaluation + a clear recommendation, written in a lively but controlled semi-formal style.

As in the classroom writing book, this page gives you the step-by-step structure, then the commonly used phrases for each step, then samples with comments. The five types of review are explained in section 5.

1. What the task is and where it sits in the paper

ItemWhat you need to know
PaperPaper 1 Reading and Writing (2 hours, 60 marks): four reading exercises (30 marks) + two writing exercises (30 marks).
ExerciseExercise 6 (Question 17), the last task in the paper.
Text types that can be setArticle, report, essay or review – the question chooses, not you.
RegisterFormal or semi-formal. A review for a school magazine or website is usually semi-formal: personal and lively, but no slang. A review for a teacher (e.g. of a coursebook) is a little more formal.
LengthAbout 120–160 words.
Marks15: Content up to 6 + Language up to 9.
What the question gives youA situation (e.g. a new café has opened), the readers (e.g. your school magazine), sometimes what to include, and some comments or a picture. Use some of the ideas and add your own.

What is a review? A review is written for a general audience. It describes something the writer has experienced and gives opinions about it, supported by examples – for instance, an example of excellent acting, or of slow service. It normally ends by telling the reader whether to try it and who would enjoy it.

How a review task usually looks (original example)
  • Situation: ‘A new water park has opened in your area. You visited it last weekend.’
  • Comments: ‘The giant slide was terrifying – in a good way!’ / ‘Food inside is really expensive.’ / ‘There aren’t enough lifeguards.’ / ‘It’s great for little kids.’
  • Instruction: ‘Write a review of the water park for your school magazine. The comments above may give you some ideas, and you should also use some ideas of your own. Write about 120 to 160 words.’

2. Marks: what each band needs

Both writing exercises use the same tables. The examiner finds the band that fits your review best, then gives a mark inside it.

Content (6 marks)What it means for a review
5–6Task fully done. Everything relevant. The style is consistently right for a review (engaging, evaluative, with a recommendation). The writer clearly has the magazine readers in mind. Opinions are well developed with examples and reasons.
3–4Task generally done. The style is generally suitable, but the review may be mostly description, the recommendation may be weak or missing, or ideas come only from the comments.
1–2Only partly done: e.g. a list of facts with no opinion, or an off-topic piece. Little sense of the reader.
0Nothing that can be credited.
Language (9 marks)What it means
7–9Skilful communication. Wide range of common and less common vocabulary (evaluative adjectives, topic words). Wide range of structures. Highly accurate. Well organised with a wide range of linking devices.
4–6Clear. Mainly common words such as ‘good’, ‘nice’, ‘boring’ with some attempts at better ones. Some complex sentences. Generally accurate. Generally organised.
1–3Meaning not always clear. Very simple vocabulary and sentences. Frequent errors. Little organisation.
0Nothing that can be credited.

3. How to get full marks: checklist

  1. A catchy title that names what you are reviewing (e.g. ‘Splash Kingdom: Thrills, Spills and High Bills’).
  2. An introduction that says what it is, where/when, and who made it or runs it – plus a hook or first impression.
  3. A short description (a plot summary without the ending, the menu, the rides, the features).
  4. What you liked – two points, each with a specific example.
  5. What you did not like – at least one point, explained fairly. A balanced review is more believable.
  6. A recommendation: a rating or verdict + who it suits (families, teenagers, fans of science fiction…).
  7. Some comments from the task and some ideas of your own (a personal moment, a price, a detail).
  8. Evaluative adjectives instead of ‘good’ and ‘bad’: gripping, breathtaking, overpriced, disappointing.
  9. Ways to engage the reader: a rhetorical question, direct address (‘If you love…, you will…’), emphasis (‘What really impressed me was…’).
  10. Semi-formal style: ‘I’ is fine, no slang, no text-speak, very few exclamation marks.
  11. About 120–160 words.
سر الدرجة النهائية في الـ Review

الـ Review ليس وصفًا فقط. لازم يكون فيه: وصف قصير + رأيك في الإيجابيات بمثال محدد + سلبية واحدة على الأقل بشكل عادل + توصية واضحة في النهاية (هل تنصح القارئ؟ ولمن يناسب؟). استخدم صفات تقييمية قوية بدل good و bad مثل: gripping و breathtaking و overpriced، وخاطب القارئ مباشرة بسؤال أو جملة مثل If you love… you will…

4. Step-by-step structure

StepParagraphWhat to writeApprox. words
0TitleName of the thing + a hint of your opinion.4–8
1IntroductionWhat, where/when, who. Why you went/read/bought it. Your first impression or a question to the reader.25–35
2DescriptionWhat it is like: the plot (no spoilers), the menu, the exhibits, the features, the price.25–30
3What you likedTwo strengths with specific examples and the effect on you.35–40
4What you did not likeOne or two weaknesses, explained fairly (‘a pity’, ‘could be improved’).20–30
5RecommendationOverall verdict + rating (optional) + who it suits and why.20–30
Short on words?

Steps 2 and 3 can be one paragraph: describe and praise at the same time (‘The croissants, which are baked every morning, are wonderfully light’). Four paragraphs are completely fine.

5. The types of review and what each one needs

The structure above never changes. What changes is what you cover in the description and evaluation, and the topic vocabulary you show off.

TypeWhat to coverSpecial vocabulary
Film / TV programmeGenre, setting, main character(s), the basic situation (no ending), acting, script, soundtrack, special effects, pace, lengthplot, cast, performance, director, soundtrack, special effects, twist, gripping, predictable, far-fetched, slow-paced
BookTitle + author, genre, setting, main character and their problem, writing style, characters, ending (without spoiling), suitable agenovel, author, chapter, narrator, page-turner, well-developed characters, vivid descriptions, I could not put it down
Place – restaurant / caféLocation, type of food, atmosphere, service, menu highlights, prices, cleanliness, opening hourscosy, spacious, mouth-watering, generous portions, attentive staff, reasonably priced, overpriced
Place – museum / theme park / shop / marketWhat there is to see or do, facilities, how easy it is to get there, queues, tickets, who it suitsexhibits, interactive displays, guided tour, rides, facilities, well-signposted, crowded, value for money
Event – concert / festival / exhibitionWhen and where, who performed or organised it, atmosphere, highlights, organisation (sound, seating, queues)performance, line-up, stage, audience, atmosphere, electric, unforgettable, poorly organised
Product / app / website / coursebookWhat it is for, design, how easy it is to use, key features, price, problems, value for moneyuser-friendly, features, design, reliable, durable, glitch, (not) worth the money, layout

Film or TV programme

  • Introduction: title, type of film, where you watched it, a hook (‘Can a film about a lighthouse really keep you on the edge of your seat?’).
  • Description: setting + main character + the situation in one or two sentences. Never tell the ending.
  • Liked: acting (name a scene), photography, soundtrack, humour.
  • Disliked: slow middle, predictable ending, too long, weak special effects.
  • Recommend: age group and type of viewer. Optional rating out of five.

Book

  • Introduction: title, author, genre. Why you chose it.
  • Description: who the main character is and what problem they face.
  • Liked: characters you believe in, exciting chapters, vivid descriptions, an important message.
  • Disliked: slow start, too many characters, an ending that felt rushed.
  • Recommend: who would enjoy it (readers who like mysteries, students aged 12+).

Place: restaurant, café, museum, theme park, shop or market

  • Introduction: name, location, when it opened, when you visited and with whom.
  • Description: what it offers (menu, exhibits, rides, shops), opening hours, prices.
  • Liked: the best dish or exhibit, friendly staff, design, location.
  • Disliked: queues, noise, prices, cleanliness, lack of seating or parking.
  • Recommend: who should go, and a practical tip (‘book a table’, ‘go on a weekday morning’).

Event: concert, festival, exhibition

  • Introduction: what, where, when. Who performed or organised it.
  • Description: the programme or line-up. The atmosphere when you arrived.
  • Liked: the highlight moment, the organisation, the variety.
  • Disliked: sound problems, long waits, high ticket prices, too short.
  • Recommend: whether to go next year and who would enjoy it most.

Product, app, website or coursebook

  • Introduction: name, what it is for, why you bought or used it, price.
  • Description: main features, design, how you use it.
  • Liked: easy to use, useful features, saves time or money (give a real example).
  • Disliked: glitches, adverts, battery life, missing features, boring topics.
  • Recommend: worth buying/using or not. Who would benefit most. If the reader is a teacher, say clearly whether it should be used again.

6. How to start: openings

Hooks and first impressions

  • Have you ever wanted to…? If so, [name] might be exactly what you are looking for.
  • Everyone at school has been talking about [name], so last weekend I finally went to see what all the fuss was about.
  • From the moment I walked through the door, I knew [name] was going to be something special.
  • Having heard many glowing recommendations, I was excited to try [name] for myself.
  • With its intriguing title and colourful cover, [book] caught my attention before I had read a single page.

Giving the facts (what / where / who)

  • [Name], which opened on [street] last month, is a [small family-run café / modern science museum].
  • Written by [author], [title] is a [mystery/adventure] novel set in…
  • Now showing in cinemas across the country, [film] tells the story of…
  • Launched earlier this year, [app] promises to help students…

7. Commonly used phrases and clauses

Describing

  • The story follows…, who…
  • Without giving too much away, the plot centres on…
  • The menu offers a wide range of…, from… to…
  • Visitors can… as well as…
  • The app is divided into…, each of which…

Positive opinions

  • What impressed me most was…
  • One of the greatest strengths of [name] is…
  • I was particularly struck by…, which…
  • The highlight of the evening was undoubtedly…
  • It is clear that a great deal of thought has gone into…

Negative opinions (fair and polite)

  • My only real criticism is that…
  • Although [name] shines in many areas, it falls short when it comes to…
  • It is a pity that…
  • At times, the [pace] felt rather [slow], which…
  • One thing that spoilt the experience slightly was…

Recommending

  • Overall, I would definitely recommend [name] to anyone who…
  • If you enjoy…, you will love…
  • It is well worth a visit, especially if…
  • I would give it four stars out of five: it is not perfect, but…
  • Unless you…, I would probably give it a miss.
  • It is a must-see for…

Linking (semi-formal)

  • Adding: what is more, as well as, on top of that, also
  • Contrasting: however, although, on the other hand, even so
  • Reasons and results: that is why, since, so, as a result
  • Concluding: all in all, overall, on balance, to sum up
Do not sound like a government report

A review for students should not be packed with very formal linkers such as ‘moreover’ and ‘furthermore’ in every sentence. Examiners notice when a review for a school magazine sounds stiff. Mix semi-formal linkers (what is more, on top of that, that is why) with a few formal ones.

Word / phraseMeaning / use
grippingso exciting that you cannot stop watching or reading
breathtakingextremely beautiful or impressive (views, photography)
predictableyou can guess what will happen – a weakness
far-fetcheddifficult to believe
mouth-wateringfood that looks or smells delicious
generous portionslarge amounts of food
attentive staffstaff who notice what you need
overpricedmore expensive than it should be
value for moneygood quality for the price you pay
user-friendlyeasy to use
interactive displaysexhibits you can touch or control
electric atmospherean exciting feeling in a crowd
a must-see / a must-readsomething everyone should see or read
give it a missdecide not to go or watch – informal but acceptable in a magazine review

8. How to end: closings

  • All in all, Splash Kingdom is a fantastic day out for families, as long as you take your own lunch.
  • If you are a fan of adventure stories, this is a book you will not want to put down. Five stars from me.
  • Is it perfect? No. Is it worth the price of a ticket? Absolutely.
  • On balance, I would recommend the app to any student who wants to practise vocabulary for ten minutes a day.
  • Unless you have plenty of patience and money to spare, you might want to wait until the crowds have died down.

9. Common mistakes and what to watch for

MistakeWhy it loses marksFix
Only describing (the whole plot, the whole menu)A review must evaluate – Content stays at 3–4.Short description, then opinions with reasons.
Telling the ending of a film or bookSpoils it for readers. Wastes words.Stop at the main problem: ‘…but will he succeed?’
No recommendationPurpose not achieved.Final paragraph: verdict + who it suits.
Only positives (or only negatives)Sounds unbalanced and less convincing.At least one point on the other side.
‘Good’, ‘nice’, ‘bad’, ‘boring’ again and againLanguage stays common – band 4–6.Use evaluative adjectives and topic vocabulary.
Copying the commentsNo development and no ideas of your own.Reword them and add an example from your own experience.
Writing a letter or an email to a friendWrong text type and register.Title + paragraphs. Address the magazine’s readers in general.
Too informal (‘OMG’, ‘sooo’, ‘ur’)Wrong register.Lively but correct English.
احذر من هذه الأخطاء
  • أن تحكي القصة كلها أو نهاية الفيلم. اكتب جملة أو جملتين فقط عن الفكرة الأساسية.
  • أن تنسى التوصية في الفقرة الأخيرة. بدونها لن تحصل على درجة عالية في المحتوى.
  • أن تكتب كأنك ترسل رسالة لصديق. الـ Review له عنوان وفقرات ويخاطب قراء المجلة.

10. Timing

Paper 1 lasts 2 hours. We suggest (as advice, not a rule) about 25 minutes for Exercise 6: 1 minute reading and underlining, 2–3 minutes planning the five steps, about 18 minutes writing and 3–4 minutes checking adjectives, tenses, spelling and the recommendation.

11. Model answer 1 – Review of a café (place)

Review of a new café (place type)160 words · Content 6/6 + Language 9/9 = 15/15
Task: A new café has opened near your school and many students go there. Write a review of the café for your school magazine. Comments from students: ‘The mango juice is the best in town.’ / ‘It’s always packed after school.’ / ‘The prices are fine for students.’ / ‘The music is so loud you can’t talk.’ The comments above may give you some ideas, and you should also use some ideas of your own. Write about 120 to 160 words.

Bean There: Great Taste, Shame About the Noise

Bean There, which opened on Nasr Street last month, has become the place where students meet after school. I went twice last week to see whether it deserves its popularity.

First, the good news. The fresh mango juice is thick, cold and easily the best in the area, and the cheese croissants, which are baked every morning, are wonderfully light. What impressed me most, though, was the price: a drink and a snack cost under eighty pounds, which is ideal for a student budget.

Sadly, the atmosphere is far from perfect. After school, it is so crowded that you may wait twenty minutes for a table, and the music is so loud that conversation becomes impossible.

All in all, Bean There deserves four stars out of five. If you want tasty, affordable food with friends, you will not be disappointed, but go in the morning if you need somewhere quiet to revise.

Why this gets the marks
  • Format and style (Content): catchy title that hints at the opinion. Four clear paragraphs following describe → like → dislike → recommend. Semi-formal and lively, right for a school magazine.
  • Introduction (Content): what (a café), where (Nasr Street), when (last month) and why the writer went – the reader is oriented at once.
  • Balance and development (Content): three positives and two negatives, each with a concrete detail (eighty pounds, twenty-minute wait, baked every morning).
  • Prompts + own ideas (Content): all four comments are used in new words. Own ideas include the croissants, the exact price, the twenty-minute wait and the tip about going in the morning to revise.
  • Purpose (Content): a clear rating and advice for two kinds of reader (friends vs. students who want to study).
  • Vocabulary (Language): easily the best, wonderfully light, impressed, ideal for a student budget, far from perfect, affordable, disappointed – evaluative, not ‘good/bad’.
  • Structures (Language): relative clauses (‘which are baked every morning’, ‘which is ideal…’), passive, ‘so… that…’ twice, a cleft sentence for emphasis (‘What impressed me most…’), a first conditional, an imperative for advice.
  • Organisation (Language): First, though, Sadly, and, All in all, but – semi-formal linking that suits the audience.
  • Word count: 160 words including the title – inside the 120–160 guide.

12. Model answer 2 – Film review

Review of a film (film type)159 words · Content 6/6 + Language 9/9 = 15/15
Task: Your school website has a page where students review films. Write a review of a film you have seen recently. In your review, describe the film, say what you liked and did not like about it, and say who you would recommend it to. Write about 120 to 160 words.

Under the Lighthouse: A Small Film with a Big Heart

Are you tired of superhero films full of explosions? Then Under the Lighthouse, a family drama now in cinemas, may be exactly what you need.

The film follows Youssef, a twelve-year-old boy who spends the summer with his grandfather, a retired fisherman in Alexandria. Without giving too much away, I can say that they try to repair an old boat before a storm arrives.

The acting is outstanding. The grandfather’s humorous performance made the audience laugh one moment and cry the next. On top of that, the shots of the sea at sunset are breathtaking.

My only real criticism is that the middle section drags. Several fish-market scenes felt repetitive, and the film could have been twenty minutes shorter.

Nevertheless, this is a warm, memorable story about family and courage. I would recommend it to anyone over ten, especially viewers who prefer real emotions to special effects. Four stars.

Why this gets the marks
  • Engaging the reader (Content): a rhetorical question opens the review and the title gives a clear opinion.
  • Covering every part of the task (Content): describes the film (paragraph 2), liked (paragraph 3), disliked (paragraph 4), recommendation (paragraph 5).
  • No spoilers (Content): the plot stops at the problem (‘before a storm arrives’) – exactly what a reviewer should do.
  • Development (Content): each opinion has evidence – a specific performance, a specific scene, a specific suggestion (twenty minutes shorter).
  • Topic vocabulary (Language): family drama, retired, performance, shots, breathtaking, drags, repetitive, memorable.
  • Structures (Language): relative clause (‘who spends…’), apposition (‘a retired fisherman in Alexandria’), modal perfect (‘could have been’), noun clause (‘I can say that…’), contrast within a sentence (‘laugh one moment and cry the next’).
  • Organisation (Language): Then, Without giving too much away, On top of that, My only real criticism, Nevertheless, especially – a wide range of devices for a short text.
  • Balanced opinion (Content): mainly positive but with a fair criticism, so the recommendation is believable.
  • Word count: 159 words including the title – inside the 120–160 guide.

13. Plans for the other types

TypeTitleIntroductionLikedDid not likeRecommendation
Book (for a school library blog)‘The Secret of Siwa: A Page-Turner for Rainy Days’Adventure novel. Recommended by my cousin. Set in the Siwa Oasis.Brave, believable heroine. Vivid descriptions of the desert. Short chapters ending in cliffhangers.Slow first three chapters. Too many minor characters.Ages 11–15, especially readers who like mysteries. ‘I could not put it down after chapter four.’
Event – school art exhibition (for the school magazine)‘Colour and Courage: The Year 10 Art Show’Held in the school hall last Thursday. 60 works by 25 students.Variety (painting, photography, clay). Students explained their own work. Lively atmosphere with music.Poor lighting in one corner. Only open for two hours.Must-see next year. Open for a whole week so parents can come.
App (for a teacher who wants to recommend apps)‘WordUp: Ten Minutes a Day, Real Progress’Free vocabulary app. I used it for a month before exams.User-friendly design. Daily quizzes with reminders. Tracks progress with charts.Too many adverts in the free version. Some example sentences sound unnatural.Recommended for Year 9 and 10 students, but use with a dictionary. The paid version is worth it.
Theme park (for a travel website for teenagers)‘Dream Park: Screams, Queues and Ice Cream’Visited during the mid-year holiday with my cousins.Thrilling rides. Clean. Good snack prices.Long queues on Fridays. Little shade.Go on a weekday. Best for ages 10+.

14. Practice tasks

  1. Task 1: Your school recently held a music concert to raise money for a local charity. Write a review of the concert for your school magazine. Comments: ‘The school band was brilliant.’ / ‘We couldn’t hear the singers at the back.’ / ‘Tickets sold out in two days.’ / ‘It finished too late for younger students.’ Write about 120 to 160 words. Make a five-step plan.

    Show answer
    Title: ‘A Night to Remember – Almost’. Introduction: charity concert in the school hall last Friday. Tickets sold out in two days, so expectations were high. Description: school band, choir, two solo performers. Money raised for the local charity. Liked: the band’s energy, especially the drum solo that had everyone clapping. A teacher–student duet (own idea). Did not like: poor sound at the back – the singers could not be heard. Finished at 10 p.m., too late for younger students. Recommendation: well worth going next year. Organisers should hire better speakers and start earlier. Rating: 4/5.
  2. Task 2: Improve this weak review sentence by sentence. ‘The film was good. The actors were good. The end was bad. You should watch it.’

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    Possible answer: ‘This gripping science-fiction film kept me on the edge of my seat from start to finish. The two main actors give convincing performances, particularly in the scene where the spaceship loses power. My only criticism is that the ending felt rushed and rather predictable. Even so, I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys fast-paced adventure.’ (Evaluative adjectives, a specific example, a fair criticism and a recommendation with a target audience.)
  3. Task 3: Your English teacher wants to know whether to keep using a revision website with next year’s class. Write a review of the website for your teacher. What should change in your style compared with a review for the school magazine?

    Show answer
    The reader is a teacher making a decision, so the style is more formal: fewer rhetorical questions and no informal phrases such as ‘give it a miss’. More formal linkers (however, in addition, therefore). The content must focus on usefulness for learning – clarity of explanations, quality and number of exercises, ease of use – and the final paragraph must clearly answer the question: should it be used again, and with which students?
  4. Task 4: Match each adjective to the most suitable thing to review: (1) user-friendly (2) mouth-watering (3) gripping (4) interactive (5) electric. Options: a museum display, a crime novel, a concert atmosphere, a restaurant dish, an app.

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    (1) user-friendly – an app. (2) mouth-watering – a restaurant dish. (3) gripping – a crime novel. (4) interactive – a museum display. (5) electric – a concert atmosphere.
  5. Task 5: Write two different final sentences for a review of a museum – one positive recommendation and one negative.

    Show answer
    Positive: ‘If you have ever wondered how the pyramids were built, this museum is a must-see, and children will love the interactive displays.’ Negative: ‘Unless you are a real history enthusiast, I would wait until the café and the lifts are working before you visit.’

Written by Mohamed Abdelkriem for Abdelkriem Academy. Compare this page with the report page: a report is impersonal and written for someone in charge. A review is personal, persuasive and written for the general public.

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